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~Kid loved him. ~


Here's part four!

Maka was smiling at Kid, until he woke up. She started turning red when he stared at her. "Hi Maka?" Kid asked oddly. Maka looked towards his hand and back. Kid followed her eyes and saw where she was looking. He pulled his hand back quickly, blushing a very hot pink. Crona woke up to Kid pulling his hand away.
Crona was looking even worse than yesterday. His skin was practically white, he was so tired he couldn't even stay awake, and he kept coughing.
Kid stayed there all day, stayed when Crona needed a test, and he got Crona whatever he needed.
Maka knew Kid wanted to stay with Crona, but he needs to go. He can't keep spending so much time with Crona in case he doesn't make it. Maka went to the doctor's room. She opened the door and saw Kid and Crona. Maka motioned Kid out of the room. Kid asked, "Is there a problem, Maka?" Maka answered, "Kid… you might need to stop spending all your time here." Kid was confused, "B-but Maka!" Maka shushed him, "In case Crona doesn't make it, being as worse as he is, you're getting too attached to him."
Kid looked upset, "Maka." He looked in her eyes, "I'm staying. I can't let Crona go." And he started to walk in. Maka grabbed his arm and almost yelled, "Kid! Stop! At least take time from him! Go home. Get rest." Kid broke free.
Kid looked angry at Maka. "Fine." He grabbed Maka. "You WILL, take care of him." And he stared in her eyes.
Maka stood there. Silent.
She nodded, "Yes. I will watch over Crona." She put her hand on her heart "I promise." Kid slightly smiled and replied, "Okay. I trust you." And he let go. He walked in and sat next to Crona. He saw Crona's eyes open slightly. "H-hi Kid."
Kid said, "Crona I'm gonna be gone for a while." Crona looked down sadly. "D-don't worry, I'll be back! J-just taking a break." And he quickly held Crona's hand.
Crona looked back up, "its okay Kid, I understand. You have school and missions to go on." And he smiled the smallest one possible.
Kid smiled. He nodded and left the room.
Kid walked home silently. Liz and Patty were gone for family problems, so he was alone. So was Crona. Around a month later, Kid was horrible. He went home, ate, read, and slept.
He would never leave his house.
This one time he left and he saw a flash of pink that threw his arms around his neck. He looked down to see a big pink tuff of fur. "C-Crona!" Kid lit up and hugged him back.
"W-what are you doing here? You should be with Dr. Stein!" Kid asked, Crona looked up, "I-I asked him i-if I could come a-and see you!" Kid hugged him tighter. "Thanks." Crona started coughing.
Kid got up and let go of Crona. He stopped, and then coughed again. Kid had to take him back to Stein.
Maka saw them walking down the hall and was furious. She walked over and said to Kid, "Kid! What did I tell you!?" Kid looked at her, "Hey! Don't blame this on me! I" Crona interrupted trying to help Kid, "I-I went to see him M-Maka. Don't wor-" he cut off to a cough.
Maka helped Kid carry him back to his room.
Dr. Stein was most displeased. "Crona, I said to take it easy." Stein looked at Crona disappointedly. Crona closed his eyes and said, "B-but Dr. Stein…" he looked at Kid and continued, "I d-didn't do anything b-bad!"
Kid sat down next to Crona's bed. "It's true." Kid looked at Stein. "He just came and hug-" he cut off and turned red, "Came and said hi."
Stein widened his eyes, "Oh my Crona." Kid looked scared. "Crona, Crona, Crona. I'm scared of what's happening to you." Kid, Maka and Crona looked at Stein. Stein noticed and turned around, "But don't worry. He's fine." And walked off nervously.
Crona looked down and did a simple cough. He lies back on the pillow and let out a deep, yet short, sigh. Kid looked and asked, "Something wrong?" he turned and murmured, "Besides suffering on the fact you're on the verge of dying." And he turned back.
Crona chuckled and replied, "No, I just knew my black blood would one day be the reason for my death." He smiled a crooked smile.
Kid looked and Crona, "Y-you're okay with this?!" Maka just gave Kid and Crona a blank look.
"I-I'll be going now. Bye Crona!" and Maka bent down and hugged him. Kid was kind of jealous of Maka. Crona always seemed to want to be with Maka. Maka helped him through everything that Kid couldn't. Maka helped Crona when he was crying even though Kid never saw him cry. Maka found him and practically saved his life against Medusa.
Kid was never there for Crona.
He snapped back into reality when he heard Crona sniffle. Kid quickly looked back, Crona was tearing up. Oh shit, Kid thought, I said I was never here to see Crona cry, and here I am!
Kid was nervous. He didn't know what to do or why Crona was crying. Kid held his hand and asked, "C-Crona, what's wrong, you were okay just a minute ago!" Crona sniffled.
"I don't want to die Kid." (Note how bad he is and the chance of him surviving.) He looked up to Kid, face tearing up, about to sob. Kid thought Crona was too adorable. "C-Crona…" "I k-know I said I was fine with it but… now I-I'm thinking."
Crona held in a tear, "I would have to leave you."Kid was by that point was about to burst into tears. Kid lashed forward and hugged Crona. Crona lets out a tear; Kid on the other side let one out too.
In about a minute, they were both sobbing, still holding tight. Crona grabbed Kid's shirt and dug his head in his shoulder. Kid put his head on Crona's shoulder, It's not normal for a shinigami to just cry.
But Kid couldn't help it; he went back sitting, and used his thumb to wipe a tear from Crona's face.
Stein had been watching in the corner, smoking. I didn't know the half which spawn meant that much to Kid. Stein let out a puff of smoke, now I shall try my hardest to keep Lord Death's son happy.
Kid sat back down and started to rub Crona's shoulder.
Crona was practically dying and there wasn't much they could do.
Awh, I was sad when I made this part.
Well, here it is. Hope 'yall like!
~ZA0314
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:iconchibinekojenny:
ChibiNekoJenny Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
Stein: Oh god, more work...
Me: Fix Crona or else me and the millions of fangirls will mess you up.
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thequadforce1 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
;n;
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Melon-Wolf Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
These feels.. ;_;
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Superlucky42 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
:U I poor crona :C
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darkmage4418 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
my reaction "its...so sad and adorible" {cries slightly} man im a sucker for romance. good chapter
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DeeSnivy Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is very good! sad but good! i thought it might be finished at part 4! well.. im glad ur still writing :)
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ZeldaArtist0314 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012
Heh, sorry. It might end in Pt 5. Eh, stil wondering.
But thanks anyway!
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DeeSnivy Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
im so excited! like, yay! youre great!
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